just stumbled upon this fic last night & I’m totally hooked. I love how you’ve adapted the severance plot to fit twice—the innie/outie groups are so well suited to the members personalities (nasamitzu office, namo roomies, mimo dancers, nosy dajeong, jichaeng revolutionaries.. chefs kiss). writing is excellent too, both for characters interiority and plot descriptions. you’re so skilled at building that sense of uncanniness and suspense from the show with the slow reveal. this is already up there in best fics of twiceland. can’t wait for more updates!!
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bittred on Chapter 6 Thu 25 Sep 2025 05:39PM UTC
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myoitron5000 on Chapter 6 Thu 25 Sep 2025 08:27PM UTC
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