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Kiyoomi slowly feels the dread build up from within him. He’s getting riled up, and there’s only so much scent blockers and suppressants can do. Why did Atsumu have to choose today of all days to piss him off? He’s already in pre-rut and PRS is killing him right now. The last thing Kiyoomi needs is Miya Atsumu to make his life miserable.
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Or,Kiyoomi tries to enjoy his lunch but Atsumu has other plans.
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When Draco's life goes to shit, he gets scammed. Maybe it's for the best. Who doesn't love new beginnings?
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These had their ups and downs, although ultimately was very very satisfying.
I loved the first book. It's a bit slow but it really built up to what I see as the main story (ie. the second book) well. It introduced the characters and the circumstances and their stances and stories and magic. It was fascinating and I reread scenes because they were just so cool. I think some more character development could've went into some of the side characters, but I understand why it didn't. The reason being that the moment you enter the second book, mostly, they all become utterly irrelevant.
That's a bit annoying, I'm not gonna lie. Harry has this great reluctance to leave that world, is eventually forced to do so by an extremely annoying and obvious plot device of a character, and then once he is there for like a week, he is like yknow actually all of those people are irrelevant. It takes a third of the book of his dithering (not even half the length of the first book) but then he just kinda unilaterally writes em all off because he has Tom now and that's just... a bit weird, I guess. It never really feels resolved well, in opinion. I think because it happens so quickly comparatively to how long the first book is that sets it all up, it just feels a bit weak.
The events in the second book in general are simultaneously amazing and also... way too fast yet not that much happens. I feel like the war is won too quickly and easily, and not enough scenes have real weight to them. The magic is awesome and really fun and enjoyable. Adore it, as always with Lomonaaeren. But I do wish there was more time and space to explore it.
A lot of criticisms but only because its Lomonaaeren, my favourite author, so I have an extremely high bar for them. This isnt one of the best works, but it's still bloody good. I feel like you can't ever go wrong reading their works, and I haven't been proven wrong on that yet.
This is no exception. It's really good. The pacing is a bit off for me, and the continuation of certain plot points could've been tied a bit better, but ultimately, still great.
The interactions between Tom and Harry are fantastic.