I'm glad you liked it, dear reader😅 I loved writing that part. Damian truly just wants to take care of Tim, but well, in his way lol and yes, he is a little shit. It doesn't help that he might be spoiled by his siblings.
About your next comments, a lot of what you said can happen, and although it really all depends on Bruce's state, in the end it can come down to Dick and Jason and what their pov of the next chapter can be😉.
Actually, when you are a vampire in a clan (claimed by another vampire) you can't override their claim, just strengthen it. So if Damian claimed Tim, he would just strengthen the bond, but that wouldn't be possible bc as a baby vampire, he still doesn't have enough of the venom needed for it😅. Although that wouldn't stop him from trying.
(That's totally them lol Tim doesn't agree with Damian at all, and Damian will be pretty mad about it bc he will protect Tim, by any means necessary.)
The blood might be enough to pull Bruce out of that state, but besides the thing that is shown in the next chapter that relates to the blood, Bruce is in a full feral state and completely in touch with his vampire side for the first time in decades. So yeah, he is very intensely affected, which you might find curious since he has shown restraint. All I can say is that vampire side or not, feral Bruce or not, one thing that will never change is how deeply Bruce loves his children, and his isntincts can't erase that😉.
Damian is surprisingly, the most coherent for sure. That will be clear.
And the body cameras turn off in the Cave, security issues and all, since they have their own shared system. But you will get context about that, dear reader.
Great artwork! Think you also edited this paragraph since my last reread. Intriguing new vibes of Tim distantly knowing he’d been claimed by his dad and that he wanted to be.
“He should question it, find the answers, and search for an explanation, but he just… didn’t. There was no need to. He distantly knew what was happening, he was claimed by his dad, and oh, how it felt right like what he always wanted. Being where he should be, in the arms of his clan, the place he belonged.”
Also yes! You noticed it! I'm so happy you did. I wanted to make it more clear how Tim has been wanting this, his pov and his scene with Bruce in the third chapter already show some of that and his insecurities about it, but I thought it lacked in the claiming scene.
Can't wait to write the talk between him and Bruce! And have fun with the reread!
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