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    In a universe where survival is forged through sacrifice, an android with a missing heart, an ex-soldier haunted by her mother’s impending death, and an exiled prince, devastated by his sister’s sacrifice, are bound by the threads of fate. Together, they navigate the boundless expanse of Mana, struggling to mend their broken selves.

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    English
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    5/6
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    01 Apr 2025

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    Good ideas. Love how they translated the different people and concepts into a space theme.

    -Interesting take on the characters' personalities, especially Jay. Having her more tough and rugged creates a good dynamic though. Good translation of Gillion's (well balanced), any criticism I would have about him here I would also have in Riptide. Chip is very similar to canon, somehow even more traumatized.
    -Extremely flowery language, to a fault sometimes because it leads to some repetition (there are only so many times smb can do smth "deliberately" before it becomes noticeable lmao). Very few spelling mistakes though, which I fully appreciate.
    -If I took a shot every time Chip had a flashback, I would probably forget my name.
    -Some holes in the narration here and there but honestly it's probably for the best, I don't mind that it skips directly to the interesting stuff.
    -I wonder if being disabled/chronically ill is close to the author's heart, because they went pretty deep into that.
    -The slow burn didn't seem so slow but I think I'm used to big books. The romance aspect made me feel things I hadn't in a long time, partially because of how it was written (well and relatable) and partially because they are characters I already know.
    -Interesting plot twist, though it's difficult to sympathize with Jay because we haven't seen ANYTHING of her mother. I think a scene or two would've helped.

    Very good stuff for my first ever finished fic, I read it continuously for like 2 days. Plus the author is a great artist, so I hope I can see more related art. Might try to translate it to french if I feel like it, I got direct permission.
    Waiting for the next update.

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