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Clashing of Waves by Mushroom_the_Trauma
Fandoms: EPIC - Jorge Rivera-Herrans (Albums), Hamilton - Miranda
28 Jun 2025
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Hamilton & Epic reaction fic.
"Today he's turning 20. For 20 years he had been wondering and wishing to meet his father. The smart and gentle king, the great warrior and the man his mother swore to be loyal to. By the time Odysseus was this age, he had already become a king, won Penelope’s heart, and soon after, led 600 men into the greatest war of their time. And what of Telemachus? The sheltered prince, who can't even hold a sword properly, not talking about stepping in and protecting his mother and his father's property. Mocked and ridiculed in his own home. Truly pathetic. He can't help but wonder if Odysseus was just too ashamed to come back to such a disappointment of a son. Telemachus would be too."
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An Overabundance Of OCs by RJD125
Fandoms: Splatoon (Video Games), SMG4 (Web Series), Murder Drones (Web Series), 僕のヒーローアカデミア | Boku no Hero Academia | My Hero Academia (Anime & Manga), Pocket Monsters | Pokemon - All Media Types, The Amazing Digital Circus (Web Series), 呪術廻戦 | Jujutsu Kaisen (Anime), Chainsaw Man (Manga), Dandy's World (Roblox), Godzilla - All Media Types, Original Work
28 Jun 2025
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This is basically just explanations and one-shots based on my OCs and hyperfixations. There will be several different AUs of this like splatoon, and the ones on Pokémon are all connected. (Don’t ask me how)
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It was a perfect, picturesque scene: two lovers joining hands in the middle, ready to be bound for life as man and wife, king and queen, till there's a loud yell, “Stop the wedding!” A loud, raspy voice calls out to the crowd before barreling down, maneuvering his way to the ground before landing somewhat gracefully.
“Sorry, is this bad timing?” The blue troll asks as he pushes his green and pink goggles back up his head. Jett looks over to Branch, who wears a strange expression—he can nearly see the gears turning in his head—staring at the strange troll. Then, Branch lets out a soft gasp before the troll continues to speak, deep voice booming as he moves closer. Something about this voice is familiar, though…
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- Part 2 of Lost Son/The Heart's Masquerade
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The Hogwarts Outlaws - Book 1 - Albus Potter and the Elven Rebellion by skunkypunk
Fandoms: Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
28 Jun 2025
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Going to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry is everyone's dream. You make friends, go on life-threatening adventures to uncover and defeat evil, compete in house cups and quidditch tournaments and learn magic along the way. At least that's what Albus has been told. So why doesn't he love Hogwarts? Why isn't it all amazing and wonderful and magical?
When nightly strolls reveal some of Hogwarts' darkest secrets, Albus and his friends set out to fight evil and free the Wizarding World like his father did before him.
But what if evil isn't as far off as they thought? And what if the Wizarding World isn't the shiny gemstone full of wonder that everyone pretends it is?Series
- Part 1 of The Hogwarts Outlaws
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Tickled Pink by DevilishlyVintage
Fandoms: Date Everything! (Sassy Chap Games Video Game)
28 Jun 2025
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Farrah has recently been fired from her job at Valdivian and has found herself in possession of some mysterious glasses known only to her as Dateviators. Finding herself in quite the situation, she decides to make the most of it.
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One lucky witch. Five book boyfriends come to life. Who will win her heart?
For the brightest witch of her age, Hermione Granger had been an idiot in love. Refusing to repeat her mistakes with Ron Weasley, she began her final year at Hogwarts college singularly focused on one goal.
Fourth year students were eligible to showcase a potion of their own invention. The winner secured a position in the Ministry Department of Potions and Magical Remedies after graduation. Hermione wouldn't rest until that job was hers.
Her love potion wouldn't simply smell like your greatest love, it would point you toward it.
When a test brew went spectacularly wrong, five fictional heartthrobs appeared out of thin air.
Luck had gifted her five perfect candidates for testing her romantic compatibility potion. Even better, those results would reveal her perfect match. This was her chance at a guaranteed happily ever after.
The only problem? She had broken a few school rules to do it.
To avoid getting caught, she had no choice but to turn to her academic rival and nemesis for help. But if she knew anything about Draco Malfoy, it was that he gives nothing for free. -
Pokemon Mystery Dungeon: Gears of Mana, A New Future by Makkuro Kiba (InkyDewott502)
Fandoms: Pokemon Mystery Dungeon, Pocket Monsters | Pokemon - All Media Types, Pocket Monsters | Pokemon (Main Video Game Series)
28 Jun 2025
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In a world filled with Mana, the gears are always ticking. Linus, Glade, and Nevada of Team Sharp Claw need strength to recover the Artifacts that ruined the land. Artifacts they cannot use. And so does Kobi, one of their future Teammates, one who can use them. When more Artifacts and info on mana resurfaces, what will happen? Where does that power to seal ruin lie?
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Kisses: One Good Impact Deserves Another by gloomy_moods_and_inspiration
Fandoms: Neon Genesis Evangelion
28 Jun 2025
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or: Three Pilots and a Horaki
or: The German, Her Wife, Their Househusband and His Alien.The world is recovering from the Third Impact. Asuka, Hikari, Shinji and Rei are living together. They aren't always very good at it.
It's not Rei's fault. Except the penguins.
Rated 'M' for depictions of trauma and mild sex. Excessive WAFF does not bump the rating. Nor does the gratuitous hand-holding.
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- Part 2 of Kisses AU (HikaSuka)
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You're an artist and you've caught the eyes of the Saja boys and they invite you draw them. Privately. Just them and you.
You unknowingly walk yourself into the lions den. And they're all hungry. -
Return to Cocoa Island by ClemSky, RedTheSonicGal
Fandoms: Sonic the Hedgehog - All Media Types, Eternal Tails Series by Pantalion
28 Jun 2025
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Sonic and Amy are finally going steady after their date on Never Mountain! A tropical vacation for the two quickly turns permanent after a suggestion from Sonic.
Can they make the most of their eternal vacation on Cocoa Island? And things aren't quite what they seem as Sonic and Amy inch closer to an uncomfortable past Miles would rather remain hidden in shadow...A sequel to Touching the Sky taking place in a divergent timeline. Longfic. Co-written by ClemSky and RedTheSonicGal.
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illustrated by KAGAMINATOR5000
strangely dark's summer vacation started a few days ago (and he barely noticed, seeing as he keeps putting on his school uniform every morning) but he's not having fun.
because his grades were below his parents' expectations, they won't take him to the zoo.one evening after handing over a particularly scary nightmare to a certain baku, he was given a wish in return.
he didn't want to waste it right away and decide to hold onto it for when he knows what he wants: today.who cares about what adults say, anyway?
on the other hand the baku wasn't expecting to be dragged to the human world in daytime. it's an unusual wish, but he can't (and would never) refuse.
despite looking 14, trickster is hundreds years old, so he can chaperone the depressed human boy to the zoo.★
strangely dark gets rained on, some hugs and hand holding, and probably scolded by his parents.
trickster gets mistaken for an elf, a glimpse into human technology, and free ice cream. -
Once In a Lifetime by 509_Racoons, Felis_Galactus
Fandoms: 검술명가 막내아들 - 황제펭귄 | Swordmaster's Youngest Son - Emperor Penguin
28 Jun 2025
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When Jin is given the chance to live his life seven different times, he decides to throw caution to the wind and try any path that suits his fancy.
Today, he constructs symphonies to please the ears of all who hear
Tomorrow, who knows what the world has in store?
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- Part 1 of Once In A Lifetime
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draft for preacher of the gods book 1 lol I need name ideas.. by thatsillyqueeratlas
Fandoms: Preacher of the Gods (Book Series)
27 Jun 2025
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Hesdaj Silverwave is a Selkie princess who has just run away from her safe life in the palace, traded for a more dangerous but more free life. As she settles into a town in the Outlands, she begins to think everything will be okay.
Then, Magic’s bond on the humans and other races alike begins to chip away and weaken, and the Gods have disappeared. She has been chosen to be hero simply because no one else will. Forced into another high-expectations and high-pressure role, she is crushed under its weight.
Everything changes when she meets Sterling Archive. A cunning and beautiful hybrid, she joins Hesdaj in her quest. Maybe the gods returning won’t be the only thing motivating her on this journey…
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A book I’m writing but I’m writing it here because fanfiction gives me writers motivation ..
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- Part 1 of Preacher of the Gods Drafts
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Pepper had been racking her brains about how she was going to let Elliot into the group proper. He has been following them around, sure, but he was right, nobody had been trying to get to know him yet. But Pepper is a genius, all she needed was a campfire and to just convince the others to show off their talents to one another.
Nothing wrong with a team building exercise after all.
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After being exiled from his home thanks to the discovery of his unique yet dangerous nature, Dainix searches for any way to learn more about himself, in the hopes of being able to control it. This leads him to search an old, abandoned castle, which is rumored to house a monster.
Falst has been hiding out in the castle for a little while now, and finds himself unusually curious about the stranger who, for once, doesn't seem inclined to harm him. -
Random mishmosh of stories(also headcanons and just ideas I have/art) by LadyMordem
Fandoms: Hermitcraft, 3rd Life | Last Life SMP Series, Empires SMP, No fandom?, Poppy Playtime (Video Game), Pirates SMP, The Legend of Zelda: Breath of the Wild/Tears of the Kingdom, The Magnus Archives
27 Jun 2025
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(Okay so apparently I cannot add any more tags so if I add another fandom to this imma make a list here instead)
I go back and add to the chapters I’ve already written pretty often, so if you like these things, it might be a good idea to come check over the material every few weeks or so :) also constructive criticism is very welcome, also any ideas you have, you are welcome to share cuz this is all just thoughts and stuff. I also have almost all of these chapters on Wattpad, from an art book I have on there. That's where they come from, and why they're so sporadically uploaded and edited.
A bunch of headcanons, concepts, art/original creatures, and half-baked random blurbs I write when I have a whim; if any of them interest you, go ahead and use em cuz I won’t XD they’re just ideas I’m throwing out for people to use :D
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The Bebe robots were created to be perfect. And for all their existence, they have strived to reach closer and closer to that divine ideal.
But time after time, Bebe kind were defeated—and nearly eradicated—by a human woman by the name of Kim Possible, causing cracks in their ethos, and controversies in their ranks.
Then one Bebe, known simply as number Nine, proposes a plan: If Kim has proven herself stronger than the Bebes, then clearly Bebe kind is missing a piece of the puzzle. There is something that she has, and they don't. Wouldn't it then be better to, rather than destroy that, seize it for themselves? Subsume her essence, her perfection, into their own?
[This fic is an exploration of the Bebes, their society, and Kim Possible's possible induction into it. As of June 2025, I've planned it out to be approximately 17 chapters long, somewhere in the 40-50k word range. The Bebes are not morally good, and the Hurt/Comfort tag leans more towards the "Hurt"-side. Kim has a very bad time, for the most part.]
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Previously Another Wings Of Fire Story (not sure what to name yet)
A story, hopefully one of my better ones
Work in progress!
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No More Composure by Bacardi_Luna for ToyBunny, AnotherSummerOfSleep
Fandoms: 呪術廻戦 | Jujutsu Kaisen (Manga), 呪術廻戦 | Jujutsu Kaisen (Anime)
27 Jun 2025
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The JJK core cast watch their future, namely the Shibuya Incident. Expect a new arrivals.
Inspired by Slow and Steady.
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In her interdimensional home, Kathleen writes her latest blog on a crucial topic that has been overlooked for too long, as she addresses a pain that many people carry silently: emotional invalidation.
With warmth, honesty, and personal insight, she reaches out to those who have been dismissed or erased—and gently encourages others to do better.
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- Part 617 of one-shots
- Part 191 of DP one-shots
- Part 262 of Therapy stories
- Part 459 of Awareness stories
- Part 351 of Modern AU
- Part 141 of Ceci Spirit
- Part 141 of Specter14's AU
- Part 562 of gift fic
- Part 557 of collection stories
- Part 16 of Blogs